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Audience Feedback on "Breaking" 2

Evaluation

Breaking Evaluation

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Audience Feedback on "Breaking"

Some audience feedback after watching "Breaking"

Breaking: Second Draft

What I have improved along with the list of improvements I needed to make on the previous post:

• Put the title next to the picture on the chair and made the text larger and last for longer than the frame
• Taken the title out of the ending and the music

Breaking: Bloopers

Some of the bloopers/outtakes from the filming of my film opening.

Breaking: First Draft

What I need to improve on my second draft:

• Take guitar music out from the beginning as it sounds too relaxing
• Break up the opening credits more - maybe add who directed e.t.c
• Change opening with the logo - add "presents" at the start
• Less kissing
• Take out some of the voice over ("stupid") as it sounds childish
• Add a fade after the part where the characters are chasing each other